A lot of (children's literature) beginners get bogged down by morals. A moral should never be driving the story. And a moral should never be confused with a plot. You can't preach to kids, and you can't talk down to them, either. It's amazing how they sense condescension.
Children, Writing
A hand held tightly, never to really let goFills up life around you, for the comforts within our soul
Spirituality